Saturday, July 21

word trails...

ocean, sea, seashore, see more, be more, leave more behind, away, a way, to say, something more, or, for, no more, words, sentences, paragraphs, pages, of ages, riffling through history, displays the cousins of rifles, killing the people's disciples, who're only remembered for their death, and what they left, behind, the only thing we could find,
was a story, a tale, of a man in jail, who without fail, failed to see, that honestly, he could be, a better person, a person of the people, and be killed by his own kind, at a battle within his own mind, at the sandy shores of an unknown beach, with the waves of doubt, crashing on the shore, with nothing more, behind it, than the ocean.

...trailing words


Blogger San said...

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5:36 am, July 24, 2007  
Blogger Frances bo bancess said...

wow... thank you so much San, I am in total awe, or maybe it is shock, of the incredibly lovely things you said. thank you for being here, I don't know whether to be humbled or totally ecstatic that someone has indeed read all of my blog, but thank you for all the hours you must've spent reading it and for commenting, i had been wondering about that dot. Thank you once again, just in that paragraph you have made my month (at the very least) fantastic.

11:32 am, July 24, 2007  
Blogger San said...

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5:52 am, July 25, 2007  
Blogger Sandy said...

Quite philosophical

1:23 pm, July 28, 2007  

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